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Your music is overpowering
Lightning needs to be looked at
To much waiting for something to happen
Keep your shadow out of the shot
Whilst some of the locations were ok others seemed poorly used
To me it was slow and boring, with more focus on 5he music, which I didn't like (I'm old)
Whilst you may find my critique harsh, it is only my opinion of things you could look at to improve, to my eyes and ears anyway.
Fixes
Sound to start with, it's a car vid, I want to hear the car.
Then look at lighting
Then content, make it fun, exciting, and show the car in detail.
Enjoy yourself
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