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Old 03-15-2013, 05:53 PM   #48
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Early rough draft. I have a history of going overboard when it comes to initial drafts, and I take my critique to tone it down.

Excuse the poor Photoshopping, threw this together in a few minutes:
I like the front but the back is too clustered. I would change the boxer image to the boxer badge, change the wording (the last part sounds weird) and make the font size smaller so it all fits on 1 or 2 lines. Personally, I'd not include a picture of teh car or the ft86 club text on the back at all. Keep it simple. IMO, T-shirts are like billboards; keep it simple so it can be read and understood at a passing glance.
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